EFTA02561773.pdf

From: ehbarak Sent: Thursday, November 30, 2017 12:46 AM To: Jeffrey E. Subject: Re: Hi Jeff I always open by nature for any=criticism. Even enjoy it in a way. Will call you on 2100. l=just really can do only a little bit about it, except for telling the edito= that I've got it from a person I highly appreciate and drive him t= put their best guy to deal with it. Best EB <=r> Sent from my iPhone On 29 No= 2017, at 18:59, jeffrey E. <[email protected] <[email protected]» wrote: I am sensitive to sounding too harsh. &=bsp; I feel as if my cousin is playing the violin for the=first performance , and it borders on the painful to listen. &nb=p; cute but painful. The english is awkward a=d makes it almost impossible to read. but&nbs=; finally , yet. finally yet but plus a few more buts and ors and fin=lly . I think every paragraph needs a college professor t= review and edit it needs a redo if you are serious about the e=glish version . =nbsp; please note The information contained in th=s communication is confidential, may be attorney-client privileged, may<=r>constitute inside information, and is intended only for the use of the=addressee. It is the property of JEE Unauthorized use, disclosure or c=pying of this communication or any part thereof is strictly prohibitedand may be unlawful. If you have received this communication in error, p=ease notify us immediately by return e-mail or by e-mail to [email protected], an= destroy this communication and all copies thereof, including all att=chments. copyright -all rights reserved EFTA_R1_01723475 EFTA02561773