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Sorry here's the job description http://optoro.com/careers/join#75779 I am getting really mixed feedback on the resume (many have said that for senior positions 2 page is the norm), but for this job agree 1 page may be better. On Sun, Jul 19, 2015 at 1:47 PM, Megan Rouse <[email protected]> wrote: > I agree, go with the one pager. A couple of word suggestions.. > > In McKinsey blurb, I think the word "served" under-describes your > contribution. I might go with "Led teams to provide expertise to > clients.." Or if that overstates since you didnt always lead, I might go > with "Provided strategy expertise to.." - or a combination "Led teams and > provided strategy expertise" . Just a thought. > > Also, did you promote early or on schedule? If early, say it. i.e. > "Transitioned ahead of peers to .." ? Is that too showy? > > In CHAI, I want to see you describe that you were literally the first > boots on the ground in some of those countries, from concept idea to full > scale implementation. Maybe you say, under Liberia, "First boots (team > member) on the ground to Establish ..."? > > Also, is there any way to approximate how many lives were impacted by the > health improvements and access that CHAI developed? For example, in the > last 10 years those clinics and operations have reached half a million > people (or whatever the number is I have no idea)? > > Under Columbia, I might change "Coursework in" to "Emphasis in" > > Now I will read the letter. I didnt see a job description but I'm sure I > can find it. > > P.S. I followd the link to you linkedin profile, it looks good! > > On Sun, Jul 19, 2015 at 10:17 AM, John Podesta <[email protected]> > wrote: > >> I'm in a meeting, so may need to do this in a few parts. I think the one >> page resume is more powerful. I'd use that. >> >> On Sunday, July 19, 2015, Mae Podesta <[email protected]> wrote: >> >>> hi there - >>> >>> i am applying for a job in DC as the Director of Corp. Strategy at >>> Optoro which I am excited about. I've heard great things about the company >>> and I think the business space they are in is pretty cool (basically >>> they've designed a software solution and ecommerce solution to manage open >>> box inventory to maximize value, reduce waste etc. >>> >>> see the job description attached. >>> >>> can you review my cover letter and give me any thoughts? Am I hitting on >>> the right things given what they are looking for? Anything I should just >>> take out? I am worried its too long winded and since I highlight my knack >>> for Comms I want to be sure it's reasonably well written. >>> >>> I want to submit this today. I am reattached my resumes also - I was >>> planning to submit my 2 page, but if you think 1 page is better, let me >>> know. >>> >>> Thanks!! based on your feedback I'll use this as a template for others. >>> >>> >
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