Re: Revised Message Frame

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this overall. just a few thoughts in attached. I think the diagnosis up front doesn't have enough edge. Barriers sounds passive especially if we're not saying who put them there. I feel like she has a deeper outrage (which came out vis-a-vis Flint) at how people are treated, valued, etc. that we need to tap into as part of diagnosing the problem--in order to meet people where they are and draw them in. Also, on the economy, I feel like we should paint a sharper picture of what people are experiencing "working two jobs to get by...etc." rather than just the absence of not getting ahead. On Sun, Feb 7, 2016 at 8:46 AM, Margolis, Jim <[email protected]> wrote: > Dan, > A few tweaks: > 1. In political barriers graph, i'd include automatic registration for > all 18 year olds. > 2. Is the 'ideas that sound good on paper' critique too late? Maybe it's > okay to conclude there, but i don't want it to get lost. > 3. I want to connect w/Oren on the media section. > > Thanks. > ------------------------------ > *From:* Dan Schwerin [[email protected]] > *Sent:* Sunday, February 07, 2016 7:59 AM > *To:* John Anzalone > *Cc:* Margolis, Jim; Joel Benenson; Mandy Grunwald; Jennifer Palmieri; > Jake Sullivan; Robby Mook; John Podesta; Huma Abedin; David Binder; Oren > Shur; Navin Nayak > *Subject:* Re: Revised Message Frame > > Yes and yes, meant to include > > On Feb 7, 2016, at 7:56 AM, John Anzalone <[email protected]> wrote: > > On the social barriers is there a reason the challenges women face is not > in there? Just seems like a natural and it is real. You mention “equal > pay” in the economic paragraph but I think it would add real value to put a > couple lines about the glass ceiling and reiterate equal pay given how much > a reaction it gets for her but also add to it the barriers to work > advancement & the difficulty of juggling work and family . > > Also, does she use “cradle to prison pipeline?” or is that new? Just > wonder if we should just say “mass incarceration.” > > *John Anzalone* > > *Partner * > > Anzalone Liszt Grove Research > > (o) 334.387.3121 > > Website <http://algpolling.com/>*| *Twitter > <http://twitter.com/anzaloneliszt>*|* LinkedIn > <https://www.linkedin.com/pub/john-anzalone/5/aa2/563>*|* Facebook > <http://facebook.com/anzaloneresearch> > > From: Dan Schwerin <[email protected]> > Date: Sunday, February 7, 2016 at 1:44 AM > To: Jim Margolis <[email protected]>, Joel Beneneson < > [email protected]>, Mandy Grunwald <[email protected]>, Jennifer Palmieri > <[email protected]>, Jake Sullivan < > [email protected]>, Robby Mook <[email protected]>, John > Podesta <[email protected]>, Huma Abedin <[email protected]>, > John Anzalone <[email protected]>, David Binder <[email protected]>, > Oren Shur <[email protected]>, Navin Nayak < > [email protected]> > Subject: Revised Message Frame > > Per a discussion some of us had on Thursday before the debate, and also > drawing on what HRC has been doing over the past few days, here's a rough > one page summary of a revised message frame. Oren has also added a note at > the bottom about paid media strategy. I know Robby is keen to engage HRC > on this as soon as possible, so we'd welcome feedback. > Thanks > Dan > > > > > This email is intended only for the named addressee. It may contain > information that is confidential/private, legally privileged, or > copyright-protected, and you should handle it accordingly. If you are not > the intended recipient, you do not have legal rights to retain, copy, or > distribute this email or its contents, and should promptly delete the email > and all electronic copies in your system; do not retain copies in any > media. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender > promptly. Thank you. >