Re: For Review: HRC @ Steak Fry

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hmmmmm On Sat, Sep 13, 2014 at 4:42 PM, Dan Schwerin <[email protected]> wrote: > HRC still isn't exactly sold on the speech. Is concerned its neither fish > nor fowl, neither a rah-rah partisan call to arms nor a really personal > narrative. Her answer is to be more direct up front about why she's there > and why she isn't. Say explicitly that she has a big decision to make and > if she decides to move forward, then she'll be back with a lot more to say > about where we should take the country. But for now, she's here for Tom > and Ruth and these candidates. Also more joking about the grandchild and > how she's waiting with baited breath. > > I'm revising now. > > > > On 9/12/14, 3:03 AM, "Dan Schwerin" <[email protected]> wrote: > > >Revised to reflect everyone¹s feedback, plus shortened to get us down to > >around 15 minutes. Teresa V and Lorraine V both have reviewed for Iowa > >sensibilities. I asked Vietor and Favreau to read it from an Obama > >perspective. Think we¹re getting pretty close here. > > > > > >On 9/11/14, 9:56 AM, "Robert Mook" <[email protected]> wrote: > > > >>Kudos, Dan. This is shaping up really nicely. > >> > >>On Wed, Sep 10, 2014 at 8:48 PM, Dan Schwerin <[email protected]> > >>wrote: > >>> All, here¹s the latest draft of the steak fry remarks. It¹s a speech > >>>about > >>> what spurs us into public service. Please send me any comments or > >>> suggestions (especially for cuts). > >>> Thanks > >>> Dan > > > > Delivered-To: [email protected] Received: by 10.25.30.9 with SMTP id e9csp915228lfe; Sat, 13 Sep 2014 15:46:05 -0700 (PDT) Return-Path: <[email protected]> Received-SPF: pass (google.com: domain of [email protected] designates 10.194.77.111 as permitted sender) client-ip=10.194.77.111 Authentication-Results: mr.google.com; spf=pass (google.com: domain of [email protected] designates 10.194.77.111 as permitted sender) [email protected]; dkim=pass [email protected] X-Received: from mr.google.com ([10.194.77.111]) by 10.194.77.111 with SMTP id r15mr13863670wjw.27.1410648364853 (num_hops = 1); Sat, 13 Sep 2014 15:46:04 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20120113; h=mime-version:in-reply-to:references:date:message-id:subject:from:to :cc:content-type; bh=5IUWY0kwjJfF/alqU9IoHhbgH9rfTbkQpLcqmWXEuZ8=; b=Nk+b6q2bypNMXGAnbenRcLjnm/qaIQQhkTX2B2TkkEW/s3aVAdKVud9Ldmn9t64zn+ hjqIapNpVIxeNV2pUX5YMdc9rMl2Bui9YyTwNg37g3wez+RtqU69wAVoLQ6+ApujV2et F/0VVzAc1K03qdpO1raKLrvPS5Jp92dNAqSrjORp82VMTaUBJh78GbfWf+V4T5odWMzt YLMDgieTeZC2dY3Q25PUnQulyBR3IjCwZNcNXLobhMa56Wjeh7chAAuRAUS/pNAsZP5E vrGL+RXXy+lx79G3vqYYYaMQlDoWlHqqKNoJh4RSNNI/HbcnXq0FgIw6sbftM5Qyn4VA FyWA== MIME-Version: 1.0 X-Received: by 10.194.77.111 with SMTP id r15mr22676099wjw.27.1410648364739; Sat, 13 Sep 2014 15:46:04 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.194.52.8 with HTTP; Sat, 13 Sep 2014 15:46:04 -0700 (PDT) In-Reply-To: <D03A2384.49055%[email protected]> References: <D03503B1.487F0%[email protected]> <[email protected]> <D03511A1.4893C%[email protected]> <[email protected]> <D036672D.48C50%[email protected]> <CA+NiFyNw5F9kEam3_rs7_CyBn9HNKCqSH-7-4Sk040nc2D-gww@mail.gmail.com> <D0381240.48E4D%[email protected]> <D03A2384.49055%[email protected]> Date: Sat, 13 Sep 2014 18:46:04 -0400 Message-ID: <CALk44aAAEduar3SEktWYyq12oiGc0LyrwDHuXYy=PYqNzRyQbA@mail.gmail.com> Subject: Re: For Review: HRC @ Steak Fry From: Cheryl Mills <[email protected]> To: Dan Schwerin <[email protected]> CC: Robert Mook <[email protected]>, Philippe Reines <[email protected]>, Huma Abedin <[email protected]>, Ethan Gelber <[email protected]>, John Podesta <[email protected]>, Jake Sullivan <[email protected]>, Nick Merrill <[email protected]> Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary=047d7bfcf35eaef1360502fa2a25 --047d7bfcf35eaef1360502fa2a25 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable hmmmmm On Sat, Sep 13, 2014 at 4:42 PM, Dan Schwerin <[email protected]> wrote: > HRC still isn't exactly sold on the speech. Is concerned its neither fish > nor fowl, neither a rah-rah partisan call to arms nor a really personal > narrative. Her answer is to be more direct up front about why she's there > and why she isn't. Say explicitly that she has a big decision to make and > if she decides to move forward, then she'll be back with a lot more to sa= y > about where we should take the country. But for now, she's here for Tom > and Ruth and these candidates. Also more joking about the grandchild and > how she's waiting with baited breath. > > I'm revising now. > > > > On 9/12/14, 3:03 AM, "Dan Schwerin" <[email protected]> wrote: > > >Revised to reflect everyone=B9s feedback, plus shortened to get us down = to > >around 15 minutes. Teresa V and Lorraine V both have reviewed for Iowa > >sensibilities. I asked Vietor and Favreau to read it from an Obama > >perspective. Think we=B9re getting pretty close here. > > > > > >On 9/11/14, 9:56 AM, "Robert Mook" <[email protected]> wrote: > > > >>Kudos, Dan. This is shaping up really nicely. > >> > >>On Wed, Sep 10, 2014 at 8:48 PM, Dan Schwerin <[email protected]> > >>wrote: > >>> All, here=B9s the latest draft of the steak fry remarks. It=B9s a sp= eech > >>>about > >>> what spurs us into public service. Please send me any comments or > >>> suggestions (especially for cuts). > >>> Thanks > >>> Dan > > > > --047d7bfcf35eaef1360502fa2a25 Content-Type: text/html; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable <div dir=3D"ltr">hmmmmm</div><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><br><div class=3D"g= mail_quote">On Sat, Sep 13, 2014 at 4:42 PM, Dan Schwerin <span dir=3D"ltr"= ><<a href=3D"mailto:[email protected]" target=3D"_blank">dschwerin= @hrcoffice.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" s= tyle=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">HRC = still isn’t exactly sold on the speech. Is concerned its neither fish= <br> nor fowl, neither a rah-rah partisan call to arms nor a really personal<br> narrative. Her answer is to be more direct up front about why she’s t= here<br> and why she isn’t. Say explicitly that she has a big decision to make= and<br> if she decides to move forward, then she’ll be back with a lot more t= o say<br> about where we should take the country. But for now, she’s here for T= om<br> and Ruth and these candidates. Also more joking about the grandchild and<br= > how she’s waiting with baited breath.<br> <br> I’m revising now.<br> <div class=3D"HOEnZb"><div class=3D"h5"><br> <br> <br> On 9/12/14, 3:03 AM, "Dan Schwerin" <<a href=3D"mailto:dschwer= [email protected]">[email protected]</a>> wrote:<br> <br> >Revised to reflect everyone=B9s feedback, plus shortened to get us down= to<br> >around 15 minutes. Teresa V and Lorraine V both have reviewed for Iowa<= br> >sensibilities. I asked Vietor and Favreau to read it from an Obama<br> >perspective. Think we=B9re getting pretty close here.<br> ><br> ><br> >On 9/11/14, 9:56 AM, "Robert Mook" <<a href=3D"mailto:robb= [email protected]">[email protected]</a>> wrote:<br> ><br> >>Kudos, Dan.  This is shaping up really nicely.<br> >><br> >>On Wed, Sep 10, 2014 at 8:48 PM, Dan Schwerin <<a href=3D"mailto= :[email protected]">[email protected]</a>><br> >>wrote:<br> >>> All, here=B9s the latest draft of the steak fry remarks. = It=B9s a speech<br> >>>about<br> >>> what spurs us into public service.  Please send me any co= mments or<br> >>> suggestions (especially for cuts).<br> >>> Thanks<br> >>> Dan<br> ><br> <br> </div></div></blockquote></div><br></div> --047d7bfcf35eaef1360502fa2a25--