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From: jeffrey E. <[email protected]>
Sent: Monday, December 4, 2017 8:50 PM
To: Astrid Gil-Casares
Subject: Re: Fist draft!
I m aware of the concept. but while amusing .=C2 doesnt move the story along. the tempo must drive =ou to the next
scene. however keep in mind =C2 this is not what i do. ask about income inequality =and i will expalin that on world
wide basis including of=course india and china income inequlaity has shrunk by a large margi=.
On Mon, Dec 4, 2017 at 3:45 PM, Astrid Gil=Casares
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No! That is my=mother. She is about to get an operation on her leg. She is definitely not=with lingerie, just with
the hospital gown. That scene is about being caug=t by the doctor with wine, pistachos (both mother and daughter
drinking) a=d Gaelle a white mask on while on hospital (thinking nurses shifts where f=nished, which they were btw!).
The doctor stays to take the mother =99s pressure etc while she doesn't know what to do with the glass =ine and Gaelle
doesn't know how to talk seriously with her mask I.=
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On 4 Dec 2017, at 21=29, jeffrey E. <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]» wrote:
in the hospital bed
:24 PM, =strid Gil-Casares
<mailto =gt; wrote:
What=would you change about Felipe? It has to be a man that attracts women. Mig=el just a
friend, not really important for the plot, could change him easi=y. Juan can't change much about him (he is real but can't
=alk much about him since my ex).
What about Olivia?
Ga=lle?
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On 4 De= 2017, at 20:53, jeffrey E. <[email protected] <[email protected]»
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i like your fetish with locksm=th line. but much of it is too common. children in=upermarket
for first time with fromerly rich mom. migule felpe= . . also i wasnt sure about 70 year old in black linger=e in bed? :)
NOFLICT charactere development. =AO littel , this is a story not a film
On Mon, Dec 4, 2017 at 2:32 PM,=Astrid Gil-Casares
<mailto wrote:
I s=ill have to write about her job (she is a children book writer and will be=in between
scenes already written), 3 more comic scenes I have already in =y mind and the end.
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