Re: REVISED DRAFT: Breaking every barrier speech

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good meeting today. > On Feb 16, 2016, at 1:48 AM, Craig T. Smith <[email protected]> wrote: > > Had Jake meet with a group of Caribbean leaders today for an hour and planning to do a Caribbean fundraiser with WJC later in the month so need to make sure whatever we got he has. Still a ways off. > > -----Original Message----- > From: LaDavia Drane [mailto:[email protected]] > Sent: Tuesday, February 16, 2016 1:36 AM > To: Megan Rooney <[email protected]> > Cc: Speech Drafts <[email protected]>; Brynne Craig <[email protected]>; Craig Smith <[email protected]>; [email protected] > Subject: Re: REVISED DRAFT: Breaking every barrier speech > > Just thought of one more thing, please take the opp in the speech to address the African and Carribean community, especially since she will be in NYC. This will go such a long way. Policy just completed a one pager for the community. Haitians need to hear from us especially. > > Sent from my iPhone > >> On Feb 16, 2016, at 12:43 AM, Megan Rooney <[email protected]> wrote: >> >> Hey everyone, >> >> Thank you so much for your comments today. We had a productive conversation with the Secretary this evening who wanted to see more in here about solutions that will actually impact people's lives. I think we've delivered that while slimming down the policy section overall. >> >> We changed the top so this doesn't start with criminal justice. She suggested we start with Flint... but first we put in Harlem so it's not negative right off the bat. >> >> She also asked that we say positive things about all that was accomplished in the 90s. So we did that, while also adding a short paragraph (3 sentences) about mistakes in the 90s too. Please be sure to take a look at that. >> >> The speech is at 3pm tomorrow so please get edits to us asap. >> >> Thank you! >> Megan + Dan >> <2016-02-16 DRAFT remarks on breaking down barriers 1230am.docx> > Delivered-To: [email protected] Received: by 10.25.88.78 with SMTP id m75csp1498051lfb; Mon, 15 Feb 2016 22:49:21 -0800 (PST) X-Received: by 10.25.127.208 with SMTP id a199mr7035864lfd.149.1455605361882; Mon, 15 Feb 2016 22:49:21 -0800 (PST) Return-Path: <speechdrafts+bncBDK7TVWG6ENBB4MMRO3AKGQEDIDHNNQ@hillaryclinton.com> Received: from mail-lf0-x245.google.com (mail-lf0-x245.google.com. 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[2a00:1450:4010:c04::22b]) by mx.google.com with ESMTPS id 204si17214705lff.124.2016.02.15.22.49.21 for <[email protected]> (version=TLS1_2 cipher=ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 bits=128/128); Mon, 15 Feb 2016 22:49:21 -0800 (PST) Received-SPF: pass (google.com: domain of [email protected] designates 2a00:1450:4010:c04::22b as permitted sender) client-ip=2a00:1450:4010:c04::22b; Received: by mail-lb0-x22b.google.com with SMTP id bc4so89606665lbc.2 for <[email protected]>; Mon, 15 Feb 2016 22:49:21 -0800 (PST) X-Received: by 10.112.16.168 with SMTP id h8mr8531380lbd.90.1455605361116; Mon, 15 Feb 2016 22:49:21 -0800 (PST) From: Jake Sullivan <[email protected]> Mime-Version: 1.0 (1.0) References: <CAFcwtWD4xBHD6Gngs5665wq5MUeWjeiZQkDcupRvEjY8zfLoBQ@mail.gmail.com> <5871394995138319546@unknownmsgid> <[email protected]> In-Reply-To: <[email protected]> Date: Tue, 16 Feb 2016 01:49:19 -0500 Message-ID: <8736116347009943734@unknownmsgid> Subject: Re: REVISED DRAFT: Breaking every barrier speech To: "Craig T. Smith" <[email protected]> CC: LaDavia Drane <[email protected]>, Megan Rooney <[email protected]>, Speech Drafts <[email protected]>, Brynne Craig <[email protected]>, "[email protected]" <[email protected]> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-Original-Sender: [email protected] X-Original-Authentication-Results: mx.google.com; spf=pass (google.com: domain of [email protected] designates 2a00:1450:4010:c04::22b as permitted sender) [email protected]; dkim=pass [email protected]; dmarc=pass (p=NONE dis=NONE) header.from=hillaryclinton.com Precedence: list Mailing-list: list [email protected]; contact [email protected] List-ID: <speechdrafts.hillaryclinton.com> X-Spam-Checked-In-Group: [email protected] X-Google-Group-Id: 112021531214 List-Post: <https://groups.google.com/a/hillaryclinton.com/group/speechdrafts/post>, <mailto:[email protected]> List-Help: <https://support.google.com/a/hillaryclinton.com/bin/topic.py?topic=25838>, <mailto:[email protected]> List-Archive: <https://groups.google.com/a/hillaryclinton.com/group/speechdrafts/> List-Unsubscribe: <mailto:[email protected]>, <https://groups.google.com/a/hillaryclinton.com/group/speechdrafts/subscribe> Very good meeting today. > On Feb 16, 2016, at 1:48 AM, Craig T. Smith <[email protected]> wrote: > > Had Jake meet with a group of Caribbean leaders today for an hour and pla= nning to do a Caribbean fundraiser with WJC later in the month so need to m= ake sure whatever we got he has. Still a ways off. > > -----Original Message----- > From: LaDavia Drane [mailto:[email protected]] > Sent: Tuesday, February 16, 2016 1:36 AM > To: Megan Rooney <[email protected]> > Cc: Speech Drafts <[email protected]>; Brynne Craig <bcraig= @hillaryclinton.com>; Craig Smith <[email protected]>; awoolheater@hillaryc= linton.com > Subject: Re: REVISED DRAFT: Breaking every barrier speech > > Just thought of one more thing, please take the opp in the speech to addr= ess the African and Carribean community, especially since she will be in NY= C. This will go such a long way. Policy just completed a one pager for the = community. Haitians need to hear from us especially. > > Sent from my iPhone > >> On Feb 16, 2016, at 12:43 AM, Megan Rooney <[email protected]> = wrote: >> >> Hey everyone, >> >> Thank you so much for your comments today. We had a productive conversa= tion with the Secretary this evening who wanted to see more in here about s= olutions that will actually impact people's lives. I think we've delivered= that while slimming down the policy section overall. >> >> We changed the top so this doesn't start with criminal justice. She sug= gested we start with Flint... but first we put in Harlem so it's not negati= ve right off the bat. >> >> She also asked that we say positive things about all that was accomplish= ed in the 90s. So we did that, while also adding a short paragraph (3 sent= ences) about mistakes in the 90s too. Please be sure to take a look at tha= t. >> >> The speech is at 3pm tomorrow so please get edits to us asap. >> >> Thank you! >> Megan + Dan >> <2016-02-16 DRAFT remarks on breaking down barriers 1230am.docx> >