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From: "I to To: al C] C Subject: RE: updated draft Date: Thu, 14 May 2020 04:26:12 +0000 Attachments: Maxwell,_Ghislaine Transcri t 04-22-16).pdf; Maxwell,_Ghislaine_Transcript_(07-22- 16).pdf; 2020-05-09 interview notes (no 302).pdf Added, at least for me our share drive takes forever to get anything, so in case it's helpful, attached are the two GM depos as well as my notes on the recent interview. Also forgot to mention but you'll see I added a big rundown, and am extremely happy for any suggestions, including on tone, on that (and similar on the substantive count stuff). Thx. From: Sent: Thursday, may 14, 2020 00:22 To: Subject: updated draft I ended up just really really wanting to cross this off my to-do list, even if just in terms of the latest turn. I tried to do a track-changes version for easier review, but because the structure got completely overhauled it ends up being a huge mess and I think basically useless. So I'm sorry about that! The main changes are that I added the "substantive count is super aggressive and also a great idea" section up top; rearranged the false statements (both internally and where they are in the memo); and accepted a million changes. Very happy for comments on all, though especially on what you think of the categories for the statements — I don't really think they ultimately fall neatly into categories, but I think multiple people thought that would be preferable so curious what y'all think. Also the comments or changes that I didn't delete or accept are the ones that I want to talk through. Let me know if any questions, etc, and happy to chat any time, and thanks as always. EFTA00086964